"Please put your critical comments so that I can publish my blog in more interesting way.You are my mirror in which I can see my face."
Second Episode
One good day, while he was about to step up in the cab, she chirpily told him to sit on the front seat as one vacant seat was there. He did it giving a silent consent to her and settled on the seat beside one of female colleague. Well that was the first time she spoke a word to him. He was too excited and happy on that day that finally she shared something for him. He would be good friend of her. But at the same time much wary to confront.
That was fortunate day, after all someone recognized him finally and trying to get access of him. When they wrapped up with their daily work around 8 PM evening, she gently headed towards his bay and started whispering with his colleague (Shalini) beside whom he sits in the organization. He felt good that she is nice, interested to make friendship. Though as normally happens, Girls are always expecting that boys should talk first and care for her, so she didn't gave any direct cue to him to take a short stroll. He keeps his eyes on every detail of her. She talked for sometime with Shalini and left the office to catch the cab. There was no any sign of prelude of being arrogant. But you know those who used to be quite and silent all the time but performing well in their way of working, are not to be assumed asinine.
Before that, after a few days of joining that organization he searched in the "Orkut" about her "Anjali Awasthi". What is this, nice…Good profile. So many testimonials from her friends, huh all bullshit, aren't they figurehead, writing crap all time trapping her for being haughty. They are not assumed to be good pals who publicize her facade. Usually girls got many testimonials on the orkut and used to boast of her being talented, focused and angel but the ground reality is almost the opposite most of the time. It has been seen when he used to surf through others profile, many writes for "about me: My Friends Testimonial says everything." in the orkut profile as the first impression of being fake.
Almost all are pretended statement exaggerating false quality and skill. If they are so nice then what is their use for the others by the way. Just to impress the others profile visitor or keep elevated themselves filled with pretentious arrogance. What is of being so good? Did you help anyone even ones in a lifetime. Have you taken any step to tackle the problem for those who suffer everyday even for a scrap of bread? Did you contribute for any victim without any expectation? You won't do such thing but yes you can put many testimonials on the orkut .Not up to that, he saw many times girls pleading for this and if they are not being pacified with splendid one, break the friendship or will ignore them for few months. This is the friendship meant for them who pretend to be calling themselves Angles. What type of arrogance is this? He doesn't even tell them that they are qualified to be called as real arrogant. Arrogance has much application and being a real arrogant is itself a quality.
I swayed away far from my compendium; let us resurrect on his examination.
That evening was last when he stepped down and exchanged an unsteady look before she went on holiday for more than three weeks. Next day as usual her friend (Gunjan Chauhan) was alone in the cab, gave him a missed call to hurry up for the office. He got into the cab on the front seat straightaway without having spread his sight of vision beyond his walking steps. No blabbering heard from behind, driver is speeding up the cab as if he feels that weight on tyre is minimal today, only two person, so he doesn't need to take care of them if the cab will have an accident only two lives would be in danger. What happened to Driver! It has been usually seen that, when there is one or two person in the cab, he used to pull away unnecessarily. Doesn't he get some common sense? How come! If he has little, he would have become more than what he is. Huh… leave it.
He peeked behind, she was not there. A sad day again, whole day was like suffering, left the office early and falls asleep on his bed without even taking dinner at that night.
Many days have been passed away, waiting for her to gaze smiling face.
Meanwhile the route and roster for them have been changed and so they will be traveling in different cab now onwards. Holy shit, this is really very ridiculous discretion taken by the management. At least they should have given some more time to get a chance to hobnob with her.
Now wait has been last today. She came today just in front of him, unwillingly chatting with her colleague (Preeti Kant) who used to sit opposite to him on the other side of bay.
He was transfixed to see her, she looks absolutely bewitching today as if she just waked up from bed after snatching a sound sleep, splashed her face with cold water and took a straight way to make her presence. Somehow he managed to turn away his eyesight from her as she too made an eye contact with him for few seconds. His heart was pounding rapidly, got blushed letting his eyelid drop slowly and fixed on the computer screen without arresting others look upon him.
Oh my god she is so daring, he was giggling quietly.See next Episode when he got to know the real about her.

3 comments:
to be very candid, the first episode was much better. story is nice, but presentation could be more captivating. seemed like u wrote this piece in a hurry. take ur time to write down and read a couple of times before posting :D
thanx...i feel so...presentation could be more cordial...but i am trying...
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